How did the writing process (brainstorming, drafting, revising, proofreading, and finalizing) shape the strength of the final essay, and what was learned about your personal strengths and areas for growth as a writer?

 Prompt Response: The writing process made my essays stronger because each step improved something different. Brainstorming helped me plan my ideas,drafting them got them down, and revising helped me fix unclear parts and add extra details I needed.I learned that I'm good at coming up with ideas but I need to improve how clearly I explain them and connect them to each ideas or detail.

Summary: Today in class we wrote the final essay.

Reflection: Today was a great day.

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